the next post I'll be reposting the entire story so far.  Please be sure to always link your contribution to the last one otherwise I may miss it when I put the thing together and post it on the web. ;)

Since I cannot decide what's to be allowed in or not (except in some obvious cases) I have included all contributions. I think that the starter of the story can help decide on when it's finished.  I'm assuming that we don't want them to drag on forever. ;)