BrainKing - 讨论板 (Poetry)

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Poetry

An outlet for players whose creativity extends beyond the board. Post your original works here!

The posting of song lyrics is not the purpose of this board and as such please refrain from doing so. Exceptions can be made to this rule if you are the copyrighted owner of the lyrics and the lyrics are not found offensive by the majority of the population.
This board is a place to post your original works of poetry and prose and also a place for discussion of poetry and related areas.

We have received word from Fencer that other's poetry can be posted to this board. These are the two conditions:
1) When someone posts a known copyrighted poem, he must add the author's name as well
2) If the author is not known, the poem can be posted without problems

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15. 十二月 2003, 13:39:11

Kickin Kanga

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题目: Next Attempt

I sat in the office all alone
Staring aimlessley at my phone
Waiting for a light in the cover
To say I had a text from my lover

Suddenly a flash on my screen
From Darren could it have been
I opened the mail and yes without fail
Here he was with his own little tale

He had been in a meeting and busy you see
But soon got in touch when he was free
My face lit with joy as I read with glee
It said "I love you" from him to me

I've just got in and it's Friday night
Darrens picture a welcoming sight
So many bullets I've had to bite
Maybe this time I will get it right

As I lie in my bed tonight I will dream
What all these feelings possibly mean
A bolt of lightening from up above
Could this be my one true love

12. 十二月 2003, 12:03:54

Kickin Kanga

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题目: Re: I see the talent too

I thank you for that comment but would like to add in my defense that I have never written a peom before and this was my first attempt. I believe my muse understood the meaning of this. Possibly badly written but Rome wasn't built in a day....I'll be back.