BrainKing - 讨论板 (Poetry)

题目: Nonchalance

What people miss out on
Not bothering to care;
A Flick of the wrist
A Disdainful Stare...LmK ~.~
Willow Press @

11. 七月 2007, 10:30:19

题目: Re: Is showing off allowed?

Bernice: I've been selected 4 times in the last 5 years and althlugh the poems are good, I find the place to be a bit of a scam type thing for amatuers.. Me being, proudly, one of them . ~.~

14. 五月 2007, 13:30:24

题目: Mom's Duet

As long as you're ebbing with their Tide
You'll get along just fine;
But try and be your Own ocean?
And they'll leave you High & Dry~LmK

8. 五月 2007, 09:49:59

题目: ^Rise^

The Night
Opened its
Eye,
And Spit!
the Sun
Up....LmK

16. 三月 2007, 07:43:18

题目: Re: Here's a poem I wrote today:

瀬人様: No offenSe. I do find this poem very good, but a Damsel is an unmarried girl. Or in another word, Maiden.. LmK

16. 三月 2007, 07:33:35

题目: Re: Quite Alright!

瀬人様: British, as in English? Never run across that one..

6. 三月 2007, 06:02:12

题目: Quite Alright!

No offense taken, which by the way, you spelled incorrectly~ lol.. have a good one~ LmK

4. 三月 2007, 09:36:57

题目: Re: Haikus

瀬人様: I too, love Haiku... I believe it was
John Barrymore ( actor, wittisist d. 1946), who said once at a very fancy gala in the 30's, 'If you cannot say it in 10 words or less, you've said too much'..One that I wrote after realizing something I'd of rather not:
" Love can break
Any Habit.....
but Lust"

4. 三月 2007, 08:30:46